The horrible dragon Show not tell

Intro:  It was a beautiful day as Jason and his friends were ready to go out on a outing. “Jason Jason” called Ellie as she cupped her hands.Jason and Ellie were cousins they haven’t seen each other for a long time. Jason and his friends discovered clues and interesting things that they might have seen. “Come over here” says Jake. “ I have a clue”he shouted. Jake got out his bag two look for his Ipad to see what is it.It’s a sharp tool and    there was a note behind the clue. “You are in dangerous by this creature beware beware” the note says. They all didn’t believe by this scary green huge creature. As they started looking for clues. Eille came looking  for the boys she called “ Jason where are you?”   She yelled.  She came running by  and saw the boys. “ Come on it’s getting dark out here” hurried Ellie. As they all started to  run very fast and speed. “ Tomorrow we will investigate some of the clues” says Jake.
That night a big huge creature came roaring he blews fires in his mouth Burning the trees and everything. When everybody were safe at home the news popped up. Last night   this sarcy old creature came out of his caveman he blew fires and burning the trees now he’s heading to town.Jake dropped his ice cream spreading all over himself his mouth was wide open and started  yelling.  “Ahh ahh he’s real he’s real” repeated Jason he was really in a sugar rush bouncing everywhere on the couch and on the table.  He messed up everything. Jake calmed him down sitting on the dining table.

The next day the boys started looking for some clues around the forest there were many trees all over the ground. They stepped onto it. They didn’t find any clue at all. It was a disappointment for the boys trying to look for some clues.Anyway they head home. A loud noise came “roar roar’’ says a huge voice. The big huge creature comes running towards

us we started to run very fast as we could.  The creature came running by chasing us. He was in  the  town stomping the buildings. We tried singing and singing until he collapse after an hour he fell into the ground.A big huge truck came to put the creature in a different place.