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Tuesday 8 November 2016

The scary mum

The doorbell had  smashed down and, cracked to my new shoes.
Jaden felt terrified and frightened he was lonely on his bed laying around staying up all night all because he felt saredy.
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At First Jaden was calling mum to come in his room.
‘’What’s up Jaden is it all because you were watching   monster movies all night no more watching’’ mum frowned.The storm hit the window and gently broken down. ‘’Oh no not again’’   Jaden yelled
. ‘’Mum my window got broken’’ he yelled with a enoughous voice. ‘’Come on
Jaden we have to rush in the car’’ shouted mum. As it was time to go in the car suddenly Jaden heard a voice and it said ‘’Jaden I will kill you
each and everyone of you’’. Then mum sat on the front seat it was
A bit bumper. After That it was time to go to the mall at sunny mays were
The beautiful view.  ‘’Time to get out of the car Jaden’’  mum yelled.
So they went to get some food to eat for lunch. ‘’ Mum can we eat ice cream and some drink please mum’’ begged Jaden. Okay let’s
go buy some ice cream sundaes’’ mum yelled with a small voice.
Until now we went over to grab some delicious niceful ice cream
with some topping on them. As they quietly went into the car we
rush to go home. ‘’Come on Jaden it’s time to eat our ice cream sundaes’’mum said with a loud voice.
‘’Oh Jaden do want to eat some ice cream?’’ Said mum when
She got out the ice cream and spread it all around.
He jumped out of his bed and went downstairs to eat his
Ice cream. ‘’ Have a taste trust me it’s nice’’ she said.
When Jaden had a taste he jumped up and yelled ‘’this is nice and
I love it’’. After he finish it was time to sleep Jaden had finished his ice cream he didn’t want go to bed  so he raced thought downstairs and bounce into his
Shoes.  ‘’I need to find my friends to help me search for that creeper man ’’he said to himself. As he saw Margaret and Billy
he walked to them. “Hey Jaden I heard you text me about the man who had creeper voice”  said Margaret. ‘’Come on in ’’billy called
with a smile on his face.
As Jaden told them about the creepy man he found out that it was
His mom that  changed into the creepy man. He know that
His parents had locked up in the closed. “I think I will get some revenge on her”Said Jaden. They went inside the house to look for
The creepy man. “How did you find me here like I said I will kill you
Each and every one of you” he replied. “Oh no not on my watch”
As he zapped the wand and turned him into jail. Jaden went and open the closed he find his parents. “ I am so happy ’’
Said mum and dad.



Jaden was so happy when his parents came out of the
Closed and they moved to another place which called
Town ways.   




3 comments:

Unknown said...

I love your story Ana GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP.

Unknown said...

I love your story Ana GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP.

Unknown said...

Wow ana very amazing great job in using your imagination KEEP UP THAT FANTASTIC WRITING

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